dicennian's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Into the Black (FFFinal)]

Well...

I guess you simply need to improve a bit in 2 things:

1. Harmonic volumes. Try to make all the instrumetns sound like one, that is harmony. Try to lower the volume on some stuff.

2. Variation. But that might be on purpose for this song. As you are going to use it for a game, it's just good without too much variation.

/D - Got Time? Check my stuff :)

beachbum1001 responds:

Hey thanks for the feedback dude.
Sadly I'm kinda aware of some of
these issues already but just lack
the knowledge/skill to change them.
I'm a huge noob when it comes to
using the fruity loops mixer. But I'm
getting better so make sure you check
out my stuff in the future!

[\a good time]

Not my style :(

It's not the worse. I don't want to pick on this song like that, but it's not too harmonic, there's the drums and the lead. Thats pretty much it. Next time, add some more stuff, and I believe the lead is a bit too high (volume)

No real critic, it's easy to improve. You are good :)

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tuxteeshirt responds:

yeah i tried to change it but every time i tried to do it it got to quiet

[FF7 - Deep Within]

Beautiful

Very good, I'm flattered, jealus and glad. I give this one a ten, for 3 reasons:

- It prooves the point that the real epic musicians is not found on the radio. It's right here on Newgrounds.
- It is a good work, or should I say rendition?
- It's touching, I just want to play the game now.

Thanks for creating this, it's going for my favorites.

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[Pan1c]

I'm quiet

This one leaves me nothing to say to be honest. I like it in one way, and in one way it's too simple and not that original. But all and all, you get a 7.

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[_/Insomnia\_ (remix)]

Okey...

I don't know what to say, my ears are pretty much hurt now. There is alot of distortion going on that is way too high for a volume. But.. insomnia, yeah this won't make me sleep so it pretty much makes sense.

But all these facts are easy to fix, the song is not actually bad. I don't know, maybe you didn't realized before you putted it up. I've done that too.

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ShootingStar responds:

Yeah, there was alot of distortion, I would agree...
And yeah, I didn't realize that...
But,
Thanks for the Review!!!

ShootingStar

[how do you find your way ?]

So professional

I wouldn't have heard if this was a millionaire artist or not. Good Job, good piano.

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Inka-Wall responds:

thanks!!!!! i'll be checkin 4 sure

[PLano Riff]

Wow, great

This is a typical of example on something that is creative. I love it, may have heard something like this before, but it's still creative. Good piece of music dude! Keep it up!

/Dicennian - Check my stuff if you got time.

Aydin-Jewelz123 responds:

Hey, thanks dude, ye i will have a look at your stuff :)

[-The Haunted-]

Nice song

I see it's your second submission to the portal. And I respect you if you are new here. Good Job. Want some critic? Sure - Try to give it more melody by using more intrstruments at the same time. Mark the bass and the melody, and use a bass in your songs more. Keep up

/Dicennian

CaptainTwinkleToes responds:

Thanks for the tips. I'll try to do that. I know it sounds a little empty but I'll work on it. Thanks for reviewing!

[Cruising (8-bit)]

Charming

Seriously, couldn't have been more charming

[WS - It's Only Fair]

great

Simply heavy and epic. Great job!